haiku wisps

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haiku wisps

Post by sooZen » May 14th, 2005, 9:19 am

abandoned nest
the doves know
a dying tree

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old dog struggles
up the back stairs
still determined


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sun on the horizon
cool morning breeze
a teaser

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haiku wisps
on the spring wind
compose
Freedom's just another word...



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Post by mousey1 » May 14th, 2005, 8:55 pm

These are great BB.

especially liked the one about the old dog....brought back some memories of old friends. :)

this my fave:
haiku wisps
on the spring wind
compose
one never knows what the wind shall bring!
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by jimboloco » May 23rd, 2005, 1:15 pm

wind bringing soft breeze
rustling window shades
cat sleeping zzzzzzzzzzzze
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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