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Post by **mtmynd** » May 14th, 2005, 9:37 am

under eighteen
the syllables piling up
keeping within the rules

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eternal micro-showers
the dust covers all
remains to be seen

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i sold the haiku-koo bird
cheap!

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Post by **mousey1** » May 14th, 2005, 9:00 pm

Haikus
Under eighteen
No booze

What's a haiku-koo bird going for these days? I've lost track.

Post by **mtmynd** » May 14th, 2005, 9:54 pm

You maka me laff, Mousey! and that is good, real good.

I was boozed up when i named a price for that Haiku-koo bird... something I oughten (?) had done... the person snatched it up quickly. Darn me! But a sale is a sale is a sale... eh?

Yeah, haikus are syllabically under-count... one must be cautious when writing those things. One never knows who may be watching.

Post by **jimboloco** » May 15th, 2005, 5:40 pm

wisp
fly swatter
bzzzz

Post by **stilltrucking** » May 16th, 2005, 9:23 am

dreaming of Haiku
No shoes no shirt no artifice
Just five eight four

The sum of my fears
Seventeen syllable death
Born in my dreams

No salvation
No death
No fear

I have heard that when one dreams of being naked it is a dream of death.

Post by **e_dog** » May 18th, 2005, 4:22 pm

Hai kool
Cool high
low dose

Post by **jimboloco** » May 24th, 2005, 1:39 pm

http://www.do-not-zzz.com/

tiny fly
buzzed
no way!

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