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I am the rage

Posted: May 20th, 2007, 4:17 pm
by mousey1
I am the rage of indecision
whose gaping ineptitudes cloud my vision
leave me spoiled

paused in the middle
I spin
headless top popping

syrupy grin

I am the rage of innocence lost
flailing intermittent wailing
baby in the cross-hairs

flowers and butterflies
and rainbow gossamers

targeted regret

I am the rage of silence
fuming flaming aim misguided
stifling disruptive internal blast

twiddling tendency to
self guess

implode

I am the rage of temptation
hot-blooded sexual tension
mind numbed vexation
my spirit come undone

fuck me

I am the rage of completely inhibited
bound by my own
sense of what's right

tie me and gag me
tag me responsible
blame to the blameless

scream out in the night

I am the rage of my own self discipline
I can't count the times
I've pointed fingers at me

I am the rage of myself on the page
struggling roiling
temperature boiling

my lid of restraint about ready to pop

I am the rage of the picture of certainty
my colors all running
like tears they won't stop

I am the rage
quieted
by soft voice and smile

calmed for awhile

I am the rage
self consuming
piled high I smolder
in my own contempt

Posted: May 21st, 2007, 8:36 am
by jimboloco
creative contempt
what i need to unlearn
thinking body dancing mind
unwind
be kind
dumbed down

Posted: May 22nd, 2007, 10:59 am
by mtmynd
would a simple "Wow!" suffice, mouseyone..? :)

Posted: May 22nd, 2007, 10:47 pm
by mousey1
it is good to be kind
yes indeed
but sometimes we got to engage a little rage
to unclog the mind

thanks for reading jimbo.


yes, mt...
a wow wows quite nicely and more than suffices me.
in fact a wow is to me as a long stemmed rose is to teeth. :wink:

Posted: May 23rd, 2007, 7:41 am
by jimboloco
engage a little rage
unwind the mind
unfurl the flag
face the wind
spit

Posted: May 23rd, 2007, 2:21 pm
by jimboloco
don't get me wrong
am not making fun of your dark side
not at all
is sublime
just want ya to know

Posted: May 27th, 2007, 2:33 pm
by mousey1
Not to worry, I take no offense never
I only appreciate that you read

my dark side I savour
privately
don't usually let it show

no one really need know that I do of course
sometimes get caught up in the emotion

the human syntax

the dropping of my avowals
the throwing off of my towel
showing a little deeper than the skin

Posted: May 27th, 2007, 7:36 pm
by jimboloco
mercy you are cute

Posted: May 27th, 2007, 11:42 pm
by mousey1
:wink:

Posted: June 3rd, 2007, 12:16 pm
by mousey1
Thank you stillt. I appreciate your comments. :wink:

Posted: June 3rd, 2007, 10:56 pm
by stilltrucking
I was hoping you saw it

http://youtube.com/watch?v=iRP1c4ly3ss

Sorry I missed your birthday jimboloco

belated best wishes