What kind of dancing is that?

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What kind of dancing is that?

Post by Doreen Peri » January 22nd, 2016, 9:18 pm

A beginning of a short story:

"Oh really? What kind of dancing is that?," he asked her and so she stopped dancing, retreated to the room and never came out. "Why don't you come out?," he asked. She shook her head. "Why don't you answer?," he asked. She shook her head. "Want to dance?" She shook her head.

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Re: What kind of dancing is that?

Post by saw » January 24th, 2016, 4:10 pm

intriguing start....open to many possibilities... will be looking for more
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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