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What kind of dancing is that?

Posted: January 22nd, 2016, 9:18 pm
by Doreen Peri
A beginning of a short story:

"Oh really? What kind of dancing is that?," he asked her and so she stopped dancing, retreated to the room and never came out. "Why don't you come out?," he asked. She shook her head. "Why don't you answer?," he asked. She shook her head. "Want to dance?" She shook her head.

Re: What kind of dancing is that?

Posted: January 24th, 2016, 4:10 pm
by saw
intriguing start....open to many possibilities... will be looking for more