Fuck it! Let's all be shit writers and parade around with papers on our ass cheeks, beaming like mad over Stoke Newington fires in Scotland, and burying our fears with the blues.
Oh I feel so validated. I was told by Levi that "now that you've got the stream of consciousness jive down you should try for more cripsness."Must we all be crisp writers?
Can't some of us be flabby?
Dangling our participles.
Overstuffing our sentences.
Ill-fitting our verbs.
Pregnant with pauses.
Our paragraphs so fat that the punctuation is popping like buttons from the strain.
Crisp..... ...puhlease....!!!!!!
I write flabby all the time!
Oh thankyou.
But me and Knip participled in the workshopz.
zit was my first, andactually I went back for a second row, mates,
they were real kool, like we'd intro ourselves, then post our submits according to the proposed topic. I found it hard to stay in topic though, but found them to be real stimulating, plus the peer to peer feedback and opportunity to also critique and give feedback was great.
http://www.litkicks.com/BeatPages/msgAr ... &parent=-1
The assignment had to to with describing in detail, expanding the sensuaal picture, and so I re-wrote a special (to me) earlier piece getting as much detail in there as I could muster. and it really did me good! yowsa, tho not more cripser then ever!
Kayla You light me up!!!!!
, what do I mean....oh yeah...all the good stuff....that be mine!!!! 
You know what I mean!!!!!)
