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~GO! "please"

Post by WIREMAN » October 4th, 2005, 4:43 am

please add a couple lines to the flow...........


I walk along a wall
a parapet
with no regrets

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Post by judih » October 4th, 2005, 5:55 am

i pause
gargoyle my surroundings
rest and spread my wings

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Post by Arcadia » October 4th, 2005, 1:02 pm

sudestada sky & new leaves
the block seems longer
maybe the wind

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Post by mtmynd » October 4th, 2005, 4:18 pm

tango music
echoing in the alley
i count the empty bottles

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Post by panta rhei » October 4th, 2005, 4:27 pm

i count while i walk
count my steps and the emptiness
and the bottles filled with gusts
and my wings are too big for the wind
that is blowing along the wall

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Post by hester_prynne » October 4th, 2005, 4:33 pm

Brazen crow,
speaks to me.
I laugh, delighted.

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Post by panta rhei » October 4th, 2005, 4:36 pm

i fill
the bottles with laughter
and toss 'em
into the wind

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Post by whimsicaldeb » October 4th, 2005, 6:09 pm

they break upon the ground
releasing the unguarded laughter into the wind
people look around, confused

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Post by stilltrucking » October 4th, 2005, 6:09 pm

walking on a parapet
on a such a windy day
working without a net
a dam good joke on me

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Post by WIREMAN » October 4th, 2005, 9:25 pm

what's on the
other side just
maybe my guide..................

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Post by mtmynd » October 4th, 2005, 9:34 pm

turning things over
to reach the other side
i find laughter

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Post by Doreen Peri » October 4th, 2005, 9:49 pm

The unexpected twist is the
very reason for laughter.
What's funny is both
on this side and the other.
Perspective is key.
Look at it upside down.

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Post by WIREMAN » October 4th, 2005, 10:26 pm

a cheshire cat grin
sits in a tree
don't ya know
it's laughing at me.......

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Post by Doreen Peri » October 4th, 2005, 10:43 pm

Turn the cheshire upside down.
His face turns into a frown.
Sit him up on his tail?
He turns pale,
disappears.
Nothing is
ever clear if
we try too hard
to discern its meaning.
I could tell you this post
represents one half of the sillouhette
of a tree but you might tell me I am a crazy girl.
It doesn't matter if you do. I will tell you again that it's true,
typing roots into the soil, smiling like a feline.

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Post by panta rhei » October 5th, 2005, 5:50 am

an upside-down smile
like a vessel
turned into a pile
like a hollow
turned into a hill
like a hole
that needed a fill

a grin can spin
and a smile
at times
is versatile

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