Laying on of Hands

Post by **Barry** » December 5th, 2008, 10:16 pm

Two different hands
female hands
Laid over a knife
the hilt of a knife
Buried in a back
a male back

Post by **Doreen Peri** » December 6th, 2008, 1:17 pm

Murder, especially between the sexes, makes for an intriguing topic.

I like this, Barry, because it leaves the reader open to imagining what the heck he did to piss her off enough to off him.

nice to see you

Post by **Lightning Rod** » December 6th, 2008, 1:27 pm

my back has no knife wounds
but there are many high-heel marks
I earned them

Post by **Nazz** » December 6th, 2008, 6:17 pm

seems like a metaphor.

Post by **goldenmyst** » December 6th, 2008, 10:20 pm

Barry, your ability to use concise words to convey powerful emotions is demonstrated here. I too see it as a metaphor. Kudos my friend.

John

Post by **MrGuilty** » December 7th, 2008, 7:53 am

Women scare the hell out of me.
When they unite against their common enemy

Post by **Barry** » December 11th, 2008, 1:50 pm

It's a stark image they lingers long after the actual event.
Thanks for the comments.

Peace,
Barry

Post by **SmileGRL** » December 13th, 2008, 8:34 am

...very vivid image barry. ouch