e.n.e.r.g.y.

[SmileGRL]

in the sPaCe
betWeen the spaces
in the tiMe
between the times
that's wHere we send
our ecstacy, teaRs
& lies
that's where we meeT
soul kiSsing soul
poet
echoing pOet
in the song of lifE
that's wheRe we dance
slow & deep
that's where lovers plaY
teAsing chance
but soMetimes
aLL we leave beHind is
loNging & tEars
longing…
& teaRs

i aM the universe &
she is you & me
and everything we see
wE are her voiCe
so miNd what you sAy
what you thinK wHat you do

heaL us
doN't hurt

[Lightning Rod]

SG, I can never decide if this random capitalization stylism is fascinating or distracting. I think in this case, fascinating.

Maybe I'm just getting used to it

[Perdida]

i aM the universe &
she is you & me
and everything we see
wE are her voiCe
so miNd what you sAy
what you thinK wHat you do

i'm with you on this one Mj.

love how you think.

m

[mtmynd]

rare, raw or you..? no matter. it's honest. that's good.. real good.

[SmileGRL]

LRod...err...sorry thanks for reading then

maree...thanks girl

cecil...i wrote this after a period of hurting and suddenly one day i thought about all this negative energy i was sending into the universe. because i expected a certain outcome and it didn't happen like that... how sad. and i'm not saying don't hurt...just...sometimes we need to let go. you know...

[goldenmyst]

MJ, this is read like a song of connectedness and mutual kindness. We are indeed all connected and should make every effort to treat each other kindly. Whoever said "sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me," didn't know what he was talking about. Your poem is a gentle reminder from the Goddess which men and women would do well to heed.

John

[SmileGRL]

you've got your finger on the pulse, my starry friend. thank you...