doN't speak. juSt kiss

Post by **SmileGRL** » February 5th, 2009, 6:39 pm

shh! doN't speak
just kiss me
like you've wanted to
for sO long
your tongue will be
my waTer
your liPs, my oXygen
& i will be
a droWning aNgel
haNging on your whiM

***
aRt on my blog...

Post by **mtmynd** » February 5th, 2009, 8:37 pm

i love when you talk like that.

Post by **Lightning Rod** » February 5th, 2009, 8:55 pm

I'm being as quiet as I can
where do you want it?

very seductive, mj

Post by **justwalt** » February 5th, 2009, 9:33 pm

justwet
justwild
justwicked
justwishful
justwhipme
justwantmore
justwearmeout
justwringmeout

Post by **K&D** » February 5th, 2009, 9:55 pm

I love poetry that evokes an emotion of the person writting it.

I like that you can feel it.

I liked this poem a lot.

its always hard to know when to play it cool

Post by **K&D** » February 5th, 2009, 10:59 pm

I wrote this after an interesting night, i think they team up well like a conversation.

My feet are in my shoes
Under these lights anything could be true.

I act like I’m not sold
You smell good, I’ve got to withhold.

Your making my head spin
I’m talking but I don’t know out of which end.

I can feel the buds on your tongue
i'll just wait for you and I to catch my lungs

Post by **izeveryboyin** » February 6th, 2009, 3:24 am

your tongue will be
my waTer
your liPs, my oXygen

Beautiful.

Post by **SmileGRL** » February 6th, 2009, 10:33 am

cecil...i love when you reply liKe that

clay...on the avatar please

...JustWalt

KD...our emotions are our poetry, if we let it speak. thanks for the "conversation"

izB...thank you kindly for the "beautiful"

Post by **goldenmyst** » February 6th, 2009, 6:51 pm

That would be an invitation I couldn't refuse.

Kissing was never so exciting than as depicted here.

John

Post by **Arcadia** » February 7th, 2009, 8:11 am

I like when you give orders, smilegrl!!!!!!

beautiful!!!!!!!

Post by **SmileGRL** » February 12th, 2009, 4:44 pm

john, arcadia...*she blows them kisses & grins*

Post by **bennie2** » February 13th, 2009, 5:52 pm

I'm constantly amazed that this isn't your first language, marjeanne.

you use it beautifully.

Post by **SmileGRL** » February 18th, 2009, 2:42 pm

thank you. so much