i don't like liquorice

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SmileGRL
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i don't like liquorice

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lovinG you is like eaTing liquorice doGs with choPsticks. you are. the caNdy with the teeth. bOth stickY. & sLipping through. you biTe me then you liCk my faCe. you make me bLeed. make me gratefuL. maKe me woNder wHat i seE. thAT's the beauty of the bEast. and i can nOt change your bark or hoW you taste. but i caN chooSe noT to eat you...

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having a licorice fixation myself i'm unable to make a good decision between my fix and this little write of yours, mj... i like this alot... while i chew my licorice... ;)
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Mmmm me likey Licorice...and me likey this write Mmmmj :D
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patience, alice


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Post by goldenmyst »

SmileGRL quite a dazzling licorice vision you unfold with magnificent sensual allure. I like spending time in your world. ;)

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thank you cecil, maree, walt & john. you are all treasures to me.

walt...yes. that is what it comes down to.
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