my words wound you

[Perdida]

my words wound you


the sun chases the moon, and i run
out of letters that hang between us
i just want you to understand
how much
the ocean knows

how it gathers the written kisses
through perpetual windows
that we dare not go into:

kenzo spreads it’s wings
leaving you, lifting me
and i fall

fall into the flowing body of your eyes

like driftwood in a stream
flecks of me
suspended there
waiting:

perhaps

my words wound you

like hard water crashing….

crashing.

[Spooky Bunny]

sweet images in here

[constantine]

it has a smooth warmth and a sense of pathos.

[Arcadia]

kenzo spreads it’s wings
leaving you, lifting me
and i fall

that lines made me smile, gracias perdida!!!!

[SmileGRL]

chasing gathering
leaving lifting
falling falling...

flowing flecks

suspended waiting
wounding crashing
crashing. crashing.

healing growing

***

maree...you flow as usual. beautiful, this & you.

hugz

[goldenmyst]

Maree, this washed over me like a surreal dream of emotional power. I feel the emotions like a rushing mountain stream as they enfold me.

John

[K&D]

Maree, absolutly lovely.

i really like your work, like i want to have a book on my shelf i can just pick up when ever!

[justwalt]

I see a spirit speaking the story while gliding over the stream on its way to the ocean...kinda ghostly-like

walt

[hester_prynne]

Like a whispered passion.....I just love this one.
H

[Mark Christopher]

how it gathers the written kisses
through perpetual windows
that we dare not go into:

fall into the flowing body of your eyes

Exceptional piece and I especially enjoyed the above lines. Poetic gold they are. A unique vision from you is evident and I truely found myself
captured by the words. Well done.

[Perdida]

Thank you everyone for your kind replies. HUGS.