another poem

Post by **constantine** » April 26th, 2009, 9:35 am

i grow fatigued
the endless confessions
the tedious postulations
the bloated self-indulgence
that leaks from this pen and that
makes me want to swear off poetry
and take up knitting or pasta design
perhaps a ravioli afghan or a scarf linguine
something practical - maybe even edible
cause the word just ain't cutting it
i haven't the faintest idea what the hell you like
or where the hell your head is at
it's a fucking crap shoot with no payoff
an award, maybe
oooh -a prize!
at the bottom of a box of crackerjack
nestled against a random peanut

Post by **stilltrucking** » April 26th, 2009, 9:41 am

the word
still cuts me like a knife

you make it bleed so good.

another hell of a good poem
thank you very much for writing
sincerely
just another fan in your peanut gallery
jt.

Post by **Arcadia** » April 26th, 2009, 5:49 pm

makes me want to swear off poetry
and take up knitting or pasta design
perhaps a ravioli afghan or a scarf linguine
something practical - maybe even edible

(five times!)

Post by **stilltrucking** » April 26th, 2009, 10:28 pm

i haven't the faintest idea what the hell you like
or where the hell your head is at
it's a fucking crap shoot with no payoff
an award, maybe
oooh -a prize!
at the bottom of a box of crackerjack
nestled against a random peanut

that bit is five times cool

if I ever get sarcastic with you dino I swear I will use a winky

sincerely
just another fan of yours
jt

Post by **mtmynd** » April 27th, 2009, 12:38 am

i'm glad you didn't name this 'just another poem' because it's not. i'm not convinced that this is 'another poem' either, but let's not fuck up this fun piece of writing. that would be unnecessary.

ty, dino.

Post by **stilltrucking** » April 27th, 2009, 1:34 am

fun with an edge.

Post by **constantine** » April 27th, 2009, 3:59 pm

thanks friends. who or what is a winky?

Post by **stilltrucking** » April 27th, 2009, 5:26 pm

what I meant was an emoticon one of these

But apparently there is nother definition of a winky whcih I had no idea.

Urban Dictionary: winky - 20 definitions - a petname for a mans penis.

Post by **constantine** » April 27th, 2009, 5:35 pm

i wonder how many slang words there are for penis - so many languages. another topic to research for science and humanity. thanks, jack