oh that crow

Post by **keithalanhamilton** » May 10th, 2009, 12:10 pm

oh that crow
cawing to be heard
reminding the listener
in a spiritual sense
magic and creativity
dwell in life’s activity
where opportunity
awaits its seeker

Post by **Yejun** » May 16th, 2009, 5:38 pm

Hmmm, an epigram?

What about making it shorter?

Post by **still.trucking** » May 16th, 2009, 5:58 pm

I need to get more active.

Thinking seems passive
but I suppose this is activity too.

Post by **keithalanhamilton** » May 18th, 2009, 8:56 am

Yejun: Hmmm, an epigram?

Not intentionally or any more then this http://www.studioeight.tv/phpbb/viewtopic.php?t=16442 being an elegy.

Just being me