In due time (more sloth philosophy)

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In due time (more sloth philosophy)

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In due time truth falls out, elegant if unceremonious, no matter how many bleak orbits. He once asked what type of extrinsic, foreign elements comprised the cosmos beyond earth—a Biblical sort of ponder. In time science told him the entire show is made of the same elements—an elegant sort of truth. Of course science agitates less elegantly over splitting elements into their most sub-miniscule particles, nibbling at its own Creation myths—the folly of youth, perhaps. Be patient ye scientists and plaintiffs, salvationists and barons. We’ll get to your concerns in due time—over-grazing, over-mining, over-stating, over-driving. Still moving too fast. There’s plenty of time for that. And less time for this.


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Post by hester_prynne »

A graceful sort of truth.
You are in that quote.
Enjoyed the read
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Thanks Hes.

One of my more lasting thought processes lately, for sure.
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unceremoniously, yes. graceful? usually not. but this piece of yours is. it felt like sitting under the stars and sipping a glass of wine. enjoyed, mr. nazzy
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Post by Yejun »

I'm not comfortable with the science/art binary (as far as I can tell a form of jealousy on both sides) but I laughed at this. What about dark matter?

I haven't read the previous piece yet. Bear with me.
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Post by Nazz »

This is another excerpt from a desert "ponder". Sorry to post these somewhat out of context. Yeah, the faux-profound theme of unity or "one-ness" over duality fades in and out of my scribblings. Haha.

My reading seems to point to the "universal elemental makeup of the universe"-- the building blocks repeat throughout, even if the same cannot be said of matter, in its various forms and manifestations.
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