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Doreen Peri
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I used to like you

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I used to like you.
I don't like you any more.
Judge me with your bullshit
and I'm out the door.

That's a poem.
How do I know that?
It rhymes.

You don't even know me.
Remember that, my friend.
This is a poem.
The end.
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Post by constantine »

you're a meanie! remind me not to get on your bad side - unless i already am, in which case don't remind me. cool poem.
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Post by Perdida »

straight to the point Doreen, no bullshit from you girlie.

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Post by saw »

at some point it hits us, that a certain so and so isn't worth another minute of effort......seems like your there.....lines in the sand can be liberating.....nice work
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8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Post by stilltrucking »

I don't know her
well I know her as well
as one can know another in cyber space
from their text and art and music

she is a straight shooter
above all she has integrity

Not to ramble Doreen
I know it is a poem
because of the economy of words
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yeah, limits are limits! :wink:
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Post by Doreen Peri »

Thanks you guys.

I thought the funny part was when I called him or her "my friend" at the end.

Hahaha!

Just a silly little snitty ditty.

:P

Seriously though, I love you guys. Each and every one of you. I love everybody! Everybody might not love me but I don't care. I love them anyway. :D
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