Letting you go

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hester_prynne
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Letting you go

Post by hester_prynne »

I floated over your antics
for a long long time my love.

Held your fickles in my heart,
grieved your shallows
in the dark.

A depth of love,
neither one of us could show,
one that I alone will know,
in this sweet fallout,
of letting you go.


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Post by Perdida »

Sooo Bittersweet, you always move me Hester.

m :D
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Post by keithalanhamilton »

This part was really great..... :D
Held your fickles in my heart,
grieved your shallows
in the dark.
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Post by Arcadia »

Billie & Hester jamming together... wow!!!!!!!! :D
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Post by SmileGRL »

heartbreakingly beautiful, miss hes. you touch deep as always.
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Post by .Lucy. »

Moving, and beautifully rhythmic...
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Post by saw »

beautiful in its simplicity and economy of words.....a simple message on unrequited love with real impact........really like this, hester.....
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Post by Perdida »

I really wish I had written this. :D
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