erotic haiku thread

Post by **Glorious Amok** » January 28th, 2005, 7:07 pm

can't stop making love
you're inside my winter coat
where fingers find seams

satin lined embrace
professor rambling soundtrack
my fingers, your seams

Post by **bennie** » January 28th, 2005, 9:52 pm

not fucked for years now
talk 'bout winter of discontent
thing is I don't mind

--

I could probably
get some if I wanted to
but do I want to?

--

Post by **Glorious Amok** » January 29th, 2005, 12:12 am

five months for me, friend
this is pure erotica
imagined only

we all have our ways
of slipping into dream states
fucking with the minds

the friction, the rub
two minds pushing together
climax fantasies

i am lost at sea
drowning in oceans of dreams
seasick with wanting....

...her.

Post by **judih** » January 29th, 2005, 1:13 am

sickness becomes you
desire envelops you
eyes beseech you

mind invitation
you come with smiles of play
your lips dance love songs

Post by **Axanderdeath** » January 29th, 2005, 1:22 am

monkey's mad love
takes only
...... a moment

(mystic flute music)

Post by **Glorious Amok** » January 29th, 2005, 9:46 am

golden curls grace hips
she has a blush like rosehips
lips lips lips lips lips...

Post by **stilltrucking** » January 29th, 2005, 10:35 am

feed the birds

Cookie crumbs on virgin snow

guide me home

in her winter coat
snow flakes melting in her hair
rosey red cheecks

sunshine in her smile
when she shined her light on me
crumbs of happiness

Post by **Glorious Amok** » January 29th, 2005, 12:13 pm

sunshine in her smile
her warmth radiates from soul
the woman's divine.

Post by **stilltrucking** » January 29th, 2005, 12:41 pm

bohemian smile
serenity in her eyes
hard headed woman

Post by **Glorious Amok** » January 29th, 2005, 1:57 pm

our tensions reflex
and rejoice in our sex genes
make us who we are

Post by **stilltrucking** » January 29th, 2005, 2:23 pm

dialogue with skin
rejoicing in the presence
of our better halves

Post by **Glorious Amok** » January 29th, 2005, 4:21 pm

glow of radiance
her tower of strength supports
columns to castle.

bow at the temple
my palms press in namaste
salute you, goddess.

Post by **lenny** » April 23rd, 2006, 10:27 pm

Great haiku! But please, I'm single and there are no coats with seams to find, only fingers to tease. ls. (laughing softly)

Be well,

lenny

Post by **lenny** » April 23rd, 2006, 10:32 pm

Glorious Amok. My first reply was to your original post at the top. Then I went down and read all seven of your replys and realized all were perfect haikus. Very nice! You have talent, girl.

Be well,

lenny

Post by **jimboloco** » May 1st, 2006, 10:54 am

years went by
without a ply
amazing penitence

the last a whore in houston
and in my regret i let
years go buy

a sympathy fuck in santa cruz
better forgot yet it sustained
a hopeless wreck vagabond

several revolutions later
found a mystic meditation group
in shreveport she appeared at my door

a jug of wine
a smile
she kissed me

a grasp of breasts
a backwards fall
penetration thrill

she yelled and yelled
i make a lotta noise, she said
afterwards burning karma

the door was opened
penitence over
sweet refrains evermore