Poetry Criminal - Vhat could be Verse?

Post by **Doreen Peri** » August 25th, 2009, 9:15 pm

I've known poets who could
kill me with their rhyme,
murder a metaphor with
an unsuitable phrase,
annihilate a simile
time after time
in various ways,
murder the language
with misused words
in an attempt to be
subliminal.
Sometimes it's
absolutely criminal.

Post by **Perdida** » August 26th, 2009, 4:56 am

I'm sure i've been criminal.... more than once

Post by **Doreen Peri** » August 26th, 2009, 12:29 pm

Haha... me too!

Lock me up!

Post by **saw** » August 26th, 2009, 8:38 pm

hey doreen, i hope I get to hear you read that some time in the near future......witty.....and oh yes......sublime........

ps. i like the watercolor, a lot

Post by **Doreen Peri** » August 26th, 2009, 10:18 pm

ha! hey steve.. never thought of recording this but could be a funny maybe to do that..

thanks much! are you sure if i do that, they won't lock me up? heh (whoever they are)
glad you like the banner.. thanks much