But Still

Post by **K&D** » November 5th, 2009, 1:35 am

your probably not but still
but still I will wait for a maybe or sometime
or I don’t know.

Your niceities send me to hostility
I will take advantage so take care sweetness
Oh I don’t know

Ill go along for the ride but really
Take me anywhere but home
Its nothing unknown

And yet I’m here still.
So still the air would be between
Us you must know.

Post by **judih** » November 5th, 2009, 2:41 am

overt is so last year
the simmering maybes of your piece
are so very present moment

well written piece K&D

Post by **saw** » November 5th, 2009, 9:39 am

I like the doubt in this, with it's well-crafted line breaks.......trying to untangle the hopelessly entwined ....

Post by **Barry** » November 5th, 2009, 10:34 pm

Everybody thinks they know, don't they? It's sooo rich.

Nice work here.

Peace,
Barry

Post by **SadLuckDame** » November 5th, 2009, 11:43 pm

I, too, likes that maybes. Good like this.

Post by **goldenmyst** » November 8th, 2009, 10:39 pm

Cool poem K&D.

Your niceities send me to hostility
I will take advantage so take care sweetness

Fantastic lines!

John

Post by **Perdida** » November 10th, 2009, 3:41 pm

Your niceities send me to hostility

Argh i know what you mean here, sighs.

Take me anywhere but home

looove that

Nice to read you again, it has been a while. I've been looking out for you too

m

Post by mb » November 10th, 2009, 5:26 pm

K&D wrote: Your niceities send me to hostility
I will take advantage so take care sweetness
Oh I don’t know

I really dig the apparent juxtapositions here that really aren't, underneath it all. I love the light touch.

-mb

Post by **Lightning Rod** » November 10th, 2009, 7:38 pm

yes, simple and full of doubt

Post by **pjbuk2** » November 10th, 2009, 7:41 pm

I love it, monologuesque.

Post by **hester_prynne** » November 10th, 2009, 11:08 pm

"but still I will wait for a maybe or so"
Great line.
Really dug the poem.
H

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