When the truth your telling yourself loses its truth

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sonofthesun
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When the truth your telling yourself loses its truth

Post by sonofthesun »

Its time
as a cat i have sat
but the mouse is now spotted
instead of plates shifting
it is now earthquakes and volcanic eruptions
and if not
i shall be swallowed by samsara
atleast within this one
of the infinite mirrors
we bow to as reality
There is no empty space
saw
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Post by saw »

says alot about our infinitesimal participation in the whole thing....
it's humbling for sure, to give yourself a reason to get out of bed, when we consider this....nicely done
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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By your faith you are healed...
not anyone else's.

(nice piece)

walt
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stilltrucking
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Post by stilltrucking »

I liked it a lot too Son of a sun
Gives me hope

Below the line don't mean nothing just a jam
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