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Sunken Forest

Deep in Bayou Sara’s
Shadowy sunken forest
In thick tussocks
A cricket’s hassock
Where grass harpists
Chirp lonely refrains
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a lone cricket
holds the tune
while i hug my pillow
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Judih, your reply was pure poetry. Basho couldn't have said it better. :)

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the world happens
everywhere we look
i can hear it now
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Post by saw »

the mini shadow world is just as busy as the human one....teeming with life, like christmas shoppers on a new york sidewalk.......another little world goes on in spite of us........
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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mtmynd, so much to hear if only we listen.

Saw, yes there are myriad worlds just out side our door. Those communities live and die in sagas as heroic as the Iliad or Odyssey.

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