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sonofthesun
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Post by sonofthesun »

your eyes see
shadows of a shadow
a place barely even passable as happening
lost in simplicity you deem complex
in your misunderstanding of your existence
you reign supreme
yet i must thank you
for if all knew
i would cease to be
as i know myself to be
and im not quite ready for that
stay lost for i am not yet found
There is no empty space
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constantine
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Post by constantine »

very nice. the feel - the wording and tempo. solid.
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