phantom pain

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sonofthesun
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phantom pain

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a life i lived
and cant remember
people were apart
but no remembrance of them
given to me through exchange of fluids
a spiral woven
There is no empty space
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Post by stilltrucking »

Reminds me of Weismann's Theory the continuity of germplasm

I felt the continuity of all life flowing through my veins

All the pain and joy too

a helix entangled up in blue

I liked your poem a lot
please pardon my ramble
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Post by revolutionrabbit »

I don't remember much
I remember too much
It seems they come in spurts
try to feel what hurts
try to forget what feels numb
this time around I came bum
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sonofthesun
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germplasm?

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germplasm is immortal, evolution through mutation and will, still the same thing, just a tweak to an immortal structure, thanks for the names to place it still trucking, life is one dynamic fucking fucker
There is no empty space
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