the haiku of day

Post by **sweetwater** » May 8th, 2010, 12:56 pm

<center>i wonder about
slipping into a dreamscape
feeling silent thoughts

in a cloud of rain
falling from the morning sky
touching the water

with my hands reaching
upward into the cool air
hoping it will last

eternally light
in the cadence of a song
goes on forever</center>

Post by **Barry** » May 8th, 2010, 9:15 pm

I watched Bicentennial Man today, a film written by Chris Columbus, of all people, from a story by Isaac Asimov, on THIS. It was about an immortal being who chose to die, if you get that.
http://www.google.com/search?client=fir ... gle+Search
I have seen the movie before, but it never fails to change my life, not unlike your poem.

Peace,
Barry

Post by **sweetwater** » May 11th, 2010, 11:23 am

never saw that movie
maybe i should
i'll have a look for it
sounds interesting

thanks for the comment

Post by **Doreen Peri** » May 11th, 2010, 11:41 am

These haiku are lovely!

Post by **sweetwater** » May 16th, 2010, 12:17 pm

<center>thanks D</center>