We go arrrrrr

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hester_prynne
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We go arrrrrr

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Ego war,
do my will
do my will.

We go arrrrrr.......,
compromise
compromise.

No way unless,
do my will
do my will.

unless no way,
but not for long
not for long.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW
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mnaz
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dig the word play, the interpretations of it..
war (let's face it, spills from the ego wars)
is given a perennial free pass, unless..
'no way,' won't go there, enough!
temporarily, until it dies off
and it's business
as usual
again.
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joel
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Re: We go arrrrrr

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Luke 22:42b
1 Corinthians 13:5b
1 John 4:8b


Have you heard the b-side way
that the love that's love would pray?
"Yet, not my will but yours be done,
though since you're love, your will is one
that won't insist to have its way."
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw
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Re: We go arrrrrr

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Hey Joel!!! Long time since I've heard from you, how are you?
And thank you for your response...Good to see you!
And Mnaz thank you too for your response...
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW
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you have efficiently and succinctly boiled this phenomenon of a relationship down to a mist that wafts up from the stove and dissipates....super....
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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WE go "arrrr" and go to warrrr. Great poem, but depressing, since it is a thumbnail sketch of humankind. Sue♥
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