HAIKU 74 DREAM CATCHER

[Sue Littleton]

dream catcher protects
nightmares stay in its meshes
only sweet dreams pass

[saw]

you have illustrated the beauty of haiku....economical poignancy....well done

[Sue Littleton]

Appreciate your comment and the analysis of a true (to me!) haiku. I am preparing a bilingual book. Here is the first haiku:

1.

verses come in dreams
pure delicate images
waking me to write

and one of my funniest haiku (because I love humour in my poems):

51.

striped black tail aloft
he pivots on two front feet
loads aims fires pure reek