haiku #1

Clarity.
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happytrails
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haiku #1

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hate is like a boil
hiding pain, till it erupts
and spreads its poison
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Re: haiku #1

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ain't it the truth? a fine piece, happy!

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festered erupted
hatred spews poison venom
spreads deadly virus
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Good one, Doreen, thanks.
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