Five crows at evening
fight the western wind.
Defeated, they veer,
slide south,
complaining angrily,
This is not where we wanted to go.
Jim 5/31/09
Five Crows
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Doreen Peri
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That's what they sound like, huh? buncha complainers... squawk! They scare me!This is not where we wanted to go.
I love this poem. Brief, descriptive, a photo of a moment in time. Thanks for sharing it, Jim!
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You always seem to manage to paint a vivid picture in very few words. Love it. And your ability to do it. 
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