haiku 5?

[happytrails]

one tiny tendril
creeps slowly from the vine. soon
a giant pumpkin

[hester_prynne]

Hah choo ah hai ku
Little sneezes in breezes
Hah choo ah hai ku

I'm not very good at these but I like them.
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[happytrails]

That's cute. Bless you.

[jim turner]

Happy, that's a neat little bit of verse. It must take up residence among the best. And that Scarlet Letter gal's response is very good, too. I thought mine were good but these have got mine beat. jim

[happytrails]

Thanks Jim. Have you tried the zebra haiku challenge? I am waiting until I can forget the ones I read. They are all so good and they left me feeling at a loss.

[Doreen Peri]

hey happy trails... I love this haiku!

But did you know we have a special forum set aside just for haiku?

I didn't know if you knew.

But it's true!

Check it out and when you do

you can post on there, too, some of your haiku.