a Lao C poem.
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Lao C Ryter
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a Lao C poem.
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Last edited by Lao C Ryter on February 23rd, 2011, 5:24 pm, edited 1 time in total.
if words could mend the holes in my quilt
night would be lost for my shiver.
-FIN
night would be lost for my shiver.
-FIN
Re: a Lao C poem.
truth without light may very well be no truth at all...
interesting write, lao
interesting write, lao
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happytrails
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Re: a Lao C poem.
This is so disturbing. The blotting out of anyone is just a terrible crime.
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Doreen Peri
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Re: a Lao C poem.
Reads like a suicide note or a warning that you're going to kill your brother.
Well penned!
I agree with happtrails. Definitely disturbing.
But I'm sure it must be fictional.
From what I've read of your work so far, you are an adept craftsman. I'm enjoying your word works.
Well penned!
I agree with happtrails. Definitely disturbing.
But I'm sure it must be fictional.
From what I've read of your work so far, you are an adept craftsman. I'm enjoying your word works.