yet another Lao C. poem

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Lao C Ryter
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yet another Lao C. poem

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Last edited by Lao C Ryter on February 23rd, 2011, 5:25 pm, edited 1 time in total.
if words could mend the holes in my quilt
night would be lost for my shiver.

-FIN
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mnaz
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good. I can think of many such steps, and envision more of them..
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Surely an original and emphatic statement. jim
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a welcome applaud to a functional relationship
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I can identify with this in so many different ways; great job.
The road to happiness: Perseverance, Endurance and a whole lot of Hope.
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