Haiku 106.

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Sue Littleton
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Haiku 106.

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106.

last night the moon bloomed
branches capture small stray moons
magnolia exalts

Anoche floreció la luna
y las pequeñas lunas extraviadas se cayeron sobre las ramas.
La magnolia se exalta.
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aah, magnolia in the moonlight...this took me back to my years in the Florida Keys and those walks home from the bar and the Night Blooming Jasmine...

there is romance in those satellite moons..............................peace, steve
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night magnolias
exalt for the chance to be
Sue Littleton -ku

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I'm sure the Moon and moons are honored for your observations, very enjoyable haiku
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Thank you, Steve and Neo -- to enjoy the images reading a haiku brings to your mind is their reason for existing as a literary form.
Cariños,
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Neatly captured, Sue.
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More than one way to see this. If the observer moves the moon will stray through branches. If the observer remains still, those big magnolias can appear to be small moons. Witchery. jim
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Thank you kindly, Terry and Jim. Hugs, Sue♥
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