Sorrow

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weepingwillow
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Sorrow

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Memories permeate
My despondent brain
Need to eradicate your
Innocuous idiosyncrasies
That brought such delight
Blackened haze devising
To envelope my weeping soul
Tormented heart, perished
Disintegrated companionship
saw
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Location: B'more, Maryland

Re: Sorrow

Post by saw »

much sadness, particularly fond of,

Need to eradicate your
Innocuous idiosyncrasies
That brought such delight
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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dadio
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Re: Sorrow

Post by dadio »

Well captured and told.
weepingwillow
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Re: Sorrow

Post by weepingwillow »

Thank you, I was told once the Eskimos had 50 different words to describe snow. This is my 28 words to describe mourning my loss.
Hollweg
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Re: Sorrow

Post by Hollweg »

Even the devil’s own
idiosyncracies are
sometimes quite charming.
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