not enough persimmon seeds

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sonofthesun: Posts: 1155; Joined: December 20th, 2004, 3:48 am; Location: the ocean

Post by sonofthesun » January 15th, 2011, 1:25 am

ever westward before the sun
with no aim but onwards
will the darkness overcome him?
or shall his mind contain dominion

There is no empty space

mnaz: Posts: 8095; Joined: August 15th, 2004, 10:02 pm; Location: north of south

Post by mnaz » January 15th, 2011, 1:42 am

his mind shall contain dominion
at least for now..

Post by dadio » January 15th, 2011, 2:28 pm

Good poem; enjoyed.

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