autumn (1st attempt at Haiku?)

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rshreve: Posts: 59; Joined: January 26th, 2011, 5:46 pm; Location: lehigh valley, Pa; Contact:
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Post by rshreve » January 30th, 2011, 5:31 pm

what my eyes behold
autumn trees giving color
winter right behind

Hollweg: Posts: 109; Joined: November 7th, 2010, 2:21 pm; Location: Houston

Post by Hollweg » January 30th, 2011, 9:16 pm

Leafless trees strangely
twisted like wrought iron in
the sculpture garden.

Night Writer: Posts: 59; Joined: January 20th, 2011, 11:24 pm; Location: Freezing in Hell, Colorado

Post by Night Writer » January 30th, 2011, 9:17 pm

Great first try.....Keep going.

neologistic: Site Tech Support; Posts: 331; Joined: September 23rd, 2010, 4:09 pm

Post by neologistic » January 30th, 2011, 11:27 pm

very relaxing, thanks for posting! more!

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