Can't you hear me?
I can't take it
any longer
your silence
brings insanity
My new alias
I set so I
could continue
to post
Its me the one
who cries
holding her pillow
Longing for the
comforting branches
Weeping Willow
In case you still
don't get it
I'm sick of hiding
Don't you see
It's me Teri
Listen, please...........
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Night Writer
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Re: Listen, please...........
Moving poem. Well written.
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creativesoul
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Re: Listen, please...........
the sadness came
she looked at it
held it
let it go
was no more reasons to hang on
see he wasnt what he said
wasnt what ya wanted
the cactus in the noonday sun
holds mositure
drink of the wetness in a dry place
she looked at it
held it
let it go
was no more reasons to hang on
see he wasnt what he said
wasnt what ya wanted
the cactus in the noonday sun
holds mositure
drink of the wetness in a dry place
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
Re: Listen, please...........
If you won't, yet I will and you'll see:
I'll name me! I'll name me! I'll name me!
I'll name me! I'll name me! I'll name me!
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw