the sun light comes to my back window
after the beach walk
i see a queen bee tearing herself out of a spider wed
i want some kind of control
its a fools whim
rooster squaking
a barking dog
chickens laughing
the farm the villa the city
i felt the tee pee deep somewhere
now in the jungle
never had any control
observing what i thought then
now
i return to places
i never knew would come back
courting the teenager
is not an easy task
queen bee
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creativesoul
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queen bee
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Steve Plonk
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Re: queen bee
Creativesoul, Interesting metaphorical poetic observations! 
Re: queen bee
never had any control
observing what i thought then
now
i return to places
i never knew would come back
I can relate to that...! beautiful poem c-soul!!!!!!!
observing what i thought then
now
i return to places
i never knew would come back
I can relate to that...! beautiful poem c-soul!!!!!!!
Re: queen bee
nicely woven, winding backwards for a second look, a new perspective....
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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creativesoul
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Re: queen bee
love taj yeah yeah
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---