tiny mammals

Honoring Constantine Pantazonis - RIP 6/16/14
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constantine
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tiny mammals

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and the snakes twist
and writhe, coiled
in reptilian hunger
never sated,
never quenched
cold-blooded
desires
coursing, pulsing
through the grass blades
tiny mammals scurry
beneath fern and vine
to escape, to outrun
the tongue that hears all
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Love it! :D

you're a genius, man
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thanks reni! i'm just a poor greek boy trying to make a buck. i'll be in baltimore the week of the 21st - maybe we an get together
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the tongue also lies a lot.....the tongue has all the resources a snake could ever dream of......sly words doctor D.....

ps......call me when you arrive, so we can terrorize the population.....
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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can we drive around and yell at people - i like that!
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yeah, just like hunter s. thompson's attorney! you know, in vegas, with those okies!

"the tongue that hears all"... nice.

could be a metaphor of government too!
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when i was writing it i wasn't thinking along political lines - i was going more in the direction of repressed desires - the libido oozing into the rational, those subliminal undercurrents that add color to our daily affairs. but, i can see what you and steve are saying - it is a facet, another face, of the same thing
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