the store

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sonofthesun
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the store

Post by sonofthesun »

ive been to the store
and ive bought things
but i was still in want
as for what i need
wasnt for sale
as i stare into your eyes
my life bleeds
infinity beckons
and i pray
not for forgiveness
but understanding
will you welcome me?
There is no empty space
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dadio
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I hope they will. moving poem.
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ButterflyKiss
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Wow! Very good!
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snowman
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understanding is better than acceptance wonderfully moving poem short and powerful
write on
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mnaz
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Post by mnaz »

not always possible to buy one's self out of want... true.

this one reminded me of that sonic youth tune... i can hear kim gordon now, "come on down to the store, you can buy some more, more, more, more"...
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