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snowman
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feel

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warm moist soft and smooth like a blue note on
a calm summer evening . string pressed down
against cold laquered wood,then released
and repeated move finger like playing chess
three steps ahead and one or two back
bass vibrates sound echoes and
you dont always hear but you always feel
and it feels good
Steve Plonk
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Post by Steve Plonk »

Snowman, The lyrical melody of sensation...Always good! :)
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dadio
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Post by dadio »

a well captured image in words. 8)
snowman
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Re: feel

Post by snowman »

steve
music and writing two reasons to keep breathing in and out

thanks dadio
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