tech no weenie

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creativesoul
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tech no weenie

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i know that the idea seemed ok at the time
until i got blasted with thick green slime
hazzmatts are kind of loose leaf tabacco
floating inthe breeze
never enough
still a sneeze
sky hung low frontier plays all off my hips another
i go away too old not to love
see the older i get
the less i know
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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dadio
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very good poem & theme.
snowman
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thats odd the older i get the better i was
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prove it
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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