The Girl with the Croissant.

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dadio
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The Girl with the Croissant.

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You watch the way the girl
Pulls apart the croissant with
Her slim fingers and licks each
Finger in turn sucking on each
With the passion of one making
Love and yet as she pulls it apart
There is that slowness oh that
Deliberate tearing open as if she
Were now opening herself for her
Latest lover as her fingers pull and
Her eyes gaze and her tongue licks
The corners of her soft mouth to
Catch escaping crumbs as if they
Were the juices of her lover’s sperm
Then she turns her head and sees
Your stare and you just wishing you
Was the croissant in her fingers there.
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Kailashana
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Re: The Girl with the Croissant.

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You should see her eating a mango.

:D


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Re: The Girl with the Croissant.

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Thank you, Anna.
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Re: The Girl with the Croissant.

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I can relate....that's why I avoid cafes.........just kidding of course.....fantasy, like dreaming has an essential role in the scheme of things......well done
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Thank you, Saw.
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