A working man

[Kailashana]

Your beard, rough, against my face
lover's sweat beading upon our bed,
lingering impressions, wheels in motion
calloused hands wrapped around my poem.

[judih]

sweet rough embrace piece
lovely, anna

[dadio]

Well worked poem.

[mnaz]

i like how you become the poem . . . effective economy / image . . .

[Kailashana]

Thank you. Judith; thank you,Terry; thank you, Mnaz.

(And thank you Barry.)

~A