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the mingo
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o baby you want your images
a moon full of werepoets
traffic alligators taking their meals
pyramid-style hunger music
your brain & mine
portable dreams
i mean we couldn't get away
from them if we tried
lets go on speaking not to be understood
but to be heard

so whisper
so shout

don't dare me to go to the river
because I'll come back
and feed it's voice to you
in a kiss

you know it
and I know it too
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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this is great.....holds the magic throughout, trumpets the inevitable forces of love in a creative flow.....like a poetic Jack Webb...." just the facts maam"
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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Thx, saw - glad ya enjoyed it. 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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so then I'll say,
"I dare you to go to the river." :P
Made me happy to read this.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll
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"pyramid-style hunger music"

fantastic
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