yes i am drunk
and on other things
but that doesnt change
the love within
they may not be pharmaceutical
but neither is what my great grandmother did
i may not know blood family
but i know truth
everyone you meet
each simple glance
yes i am
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sonofthesun
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yes i am
There is no empty space
Re: yes i am
I can´t avoid to feel definitions acrobatic, loved the beggining of the poem! 
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creativesoul
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Re: yes i am
i went down a road
a few too many times
finally i was allowed out
of that place
any day now i kept saying
going back
looking pretty sad
but sometimes ya GET BLESSED
THE GREAT FORTUNE SAYS
that i can do this
even if i feel like im dying
so i wish you good things
a few too many times
finally i was allowed out
of that place
any day now i kept saying
going back
looking pretty sad
but sometimes ya GET BLESSED
THE GREAT FORTUNE SAYS
that i can do this
even if i feel like im dying
so i wish you good things
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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sonofthesun
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Re: yes i am
i find myself crying...
not in sadness...
but in sadness of others not knowing
what ive found
and the need to share it
the worry of others is killing me
as is the beauty
we fail to acknowledge
not in sadness...
but in sadness of others not knowing
what ive found
and the need to share it
the worry of others is killing me
as is the beauty
we fail to acknowledge
There is no empty space
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creativesoul
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Re: yes i am
the whole process we go thru is from nebulous to solid- balance and moderation are wonky
in there
somehwere
in there
somehwere
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
Re: yes i am
a poem of depth and feeling.