liquid conciousness

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Arcadia
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liquid conciousness

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mid spring
& everything´s leaving a drop
the skies, the bodies, the trees
seem to share again well known & misterious notes
in subtropicals dejavus,
yellow-night-lights mirrors
evaporating asphalts & heavy scents

where´s the wind?
be careful while you walk!
really?
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careful where i walk
snails slide underfoot
i'm sorry!
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Good work.
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gracias for reading, you two! :D I forgot the Spanish version ... :roll: :lol:

Mediados de primavera
y todo está a punto de solar una gota:
los cielos, los cuerpos, los árboles
parecen compartir otra vez
bien conocidas y a la vez misteriosas notas
en dejavus subtropicales.

Las luces amarillas de la noche reflejan
asfalto en evaporación y profundos perfumes ...

¿dónde está el viento?
¡tené cuidado al caminar!
¿en serio?
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Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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thoughts that ooze, liquid but thick like the unknown.....nice work
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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