men at play

[constantine]

going to hit the alleys
duckpins of the working-class,
the antithesis of the horsey set
with their bridle paths
and tally-ho bullshit,
hurling that ball - a comet
from the right hand of god
smashing the pins like the athenians
at marathon, crushing the persian line
it's a treasure trove of sensory input
and the people are funny too!
with their shirts and hand-towels
the accoutrements of aficianados
as they vent the anger of a lifetime,
of swing shifts and red-faced foremen
trotting on the treadmill
and never quite getting there,
if only the pins had faces
if only the horses could speak

[creativesoul]

aloha-welcome back- nice mood in this one... go for it---

[the mingo]

WHAM !

[constantine]

thank you, creativesoul and mr. mingo. i just got back from mongolia and was itching to write something.

[the mingo]

Mongolia will do that to ya