manifesto

Post by 4° » March 12th, 2005, 2:02 pm

configured
facade
and the path of
least resistance
my insistance
to house you
in my pith
capricious myth
i
regret
nothing
as i bask in
the glow of a
faraway son

hester_prynne · Post by **hester_prynne** » March 12th, 2005, 3:20 pm

Capricious myth, unhand my pith!
Who says so?
Womanifesto!

A snippet from an epic.

Nicely done,

H

Post by **judih** » March 12th, 2005, 3:30 pm

humanifesto
complex
inclusive creatures

love bonds us all

Post by 4° » March 12th, 2005, 5:10 pm

yes. so thankful.

Post by **bennie** » March 13th, 2005, 9:26 am

Great rythmn in this poem.

You know, I've stopped checking the spelling of that word now. I've gotten past caring.

Rithim
rythmn
rhythmn
rhythm
Ridim

yes yes. ridim. this is the ridim I like.

and rhyme too. Ryhme rime rhyhewoqlme.

too hard.

I used to get confused about quite quiet now it's rhythmn and rhyme.

Bloody words man!

The sooner Newspeak kicks in the better.

I liked your poem though.

Post by 4° » March 13th, 2005, 5:58 pm

thanks bennie.

Post by **mtmynd** » March 13th, 2005, 9:18 pm

nicely done, 4d... a special flow to that, indeed!

Post by 4° » March 14th, 2005, 10:51 pm

thank you, c. it don't happen so often anymore, but when it does it means more.

Post by **Lightning Rod** » March 14th, 2005, 11:10 pm

Demand a festival
I can't manage my festo
and my fresco flakes off the walls
like a Michaelangelo rebar fiesta