10:05 a.m.

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the mingo
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10:05 a.m.

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10:05 a.m.

we each take our positions
stripped of all nonsense
you to doze & wait developments
me to begin drinking coffee

if i were
talking to myself
i'd say don't even
think about it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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sweet ...
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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Second stanza is superb understatement.
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.
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